The Tomorrow Code.... Reviews...

The prologue:
a couple of people from the government/Army these guys were dressed in bio-suits discover that there is a problem in Alaska..there was a science lab /research centre but no scienctist, only their clothes ... there must of been a fire and the sprinklers went off and then the water froze the water..they thought to themselves the scientists wouldn't go in the snow in the nude,then some one suggested that there must of been nudist aliens.. then they thought maybe there was a virus let loose and the scientist went crazy..


the story starts with a song called Big yellow taxi by Joni Mitchell
Tane Richards and Rebecca Williams were climbing up a 21 story building to put up a banner to save awareness of some sort..they had to absail to a certain point then attatch the banner.. after that they had to go all the way back up the building as soon as they reached the top they were whooping with exhilaration..they were having an arguement over what if time travel existed and rebecca was smarter out of them two.then after that they said bye to each other and thats where the chapter ends...

the next chapter is chapter 2 is when they go protesting they are trying to save the whales ... somewhere along the line rebecca gets arrested.. she gets to go and her mum looks angry and confused...

chapter 3 is when Tane and Rebecca are playing chess when they hear Tane's brother (Fatboy) Harley he comes in and his helmet is off and he has a moko on his face tane says his gonna be in trouble .... rebecca and harley start talking tane gets jealous ..harley asks rebecca out on a date..

chapter four is when rebecca and harley go to the movies for a date she has already classified it as a date..the date went well.. she wanted to watch a sort of movie he would like ... the movie wasn't that interesting...

chapter 5 is when rebecca finds out about the bill her mum hasn't paid after her fathers death .. and starts worring .. her and harley where going to go on another date to the ice rink but he heard about the bill thing .. and went to his special place under the bridge .. and he hugs her and she hugs back ...

Poison.....(reviews)

TAKEN!
Poison must travel to the end of the world to outwit the Phaerie Lord and get her sister back. But are those she meets on the way trying to help her-or lead her into a trap?

Talks about her family and when she reaches a certain age she is aloud to change her name... her name was foxglove and she changed her name to poison..

The next chapter her sister gets stolen by the Phaerie Lord and she decideds to meet up with a good friend fleet to talk about the matter and how she wants to get her sister Azlea back and he tries to stop her from going because her father will be losing 2 daughters , ( she has a very strange relationship with her mother, poison calls her snapdragon and not mother..)but doesn't listen..

found out that snapdragon is only her step mother not her mother ..
poison meets a friend bram who helps her on her journey..

she wants bram to tell her parents something(message) but there is nothing on her mind, she was thinking that she is the poison of the family.... she was thinking of her sister Azlea in her crib...